Shop More Submit  Join Login

This deviation was deleted


:iconb9tribeca:
Great artwork there, I see that you really put a lot into this artwork.

As far a coloring is concerned it looks great. The tan sweaty skin with small beads of sweat is a nice touch. Your avatar in the in the pelvic area as a censor is also a nice touch too, hehe.

My only constructive criticism is that the perspective is off for the right arm and leg. Perspective can be a tricky business for many people especially beginners (I was there too) and I can see that you were trying to achieve that in this picture.

The right leg should have been thinner and slightly longer (only by a few millimeters) than the left leg to achieve a perspective balance. The right leg should also be angled with the knee and foot facing towards the viewer seeing the picture. the same goes for the right arm where the elbow should be angled towards the viewer for perspective balance.

You are on the right track on making muscle girls. Some practice on body perspective is required and you will achieve visual balance in your character drawings
The Artist thought this was FAIR
12 out of 13 deviants thought this was fair.

Comments


:iconniinine:
niinine Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
ahhhhhh! oh my god, you really did it! thank you so much, thank you, thank you! n v n

and now that you told me, i completely understand what you're saying! i really should have mapped her body out better before drawing it, because the perspectives are pretty wonky

i'll take all of this to heart! again, thank you!
Reply
:iconb9tribeca:
B9TRIBECA Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
My pleasure 9. :D
Reply
Add a Comment: